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Submission package edit by Mary Kole Editorial
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Mary Kole Editorial: Submission Package Edit

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I will read the first ten pages of your work and critique the writing, scene work, dialogue, action, pacing, the “promise of the novel” (this is very important, yet few writers ever think about it), characters, and more. Includes a line edit, actionable advice, and writing feedback. With my notes, you’ll have the confidence and know-how to make your work shine throughout.

Up to one single-spaced page query, four double-spaced pages synopsis, and ten double-spaced first pages of your manuscript.

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I will read the first ten pages of your work and critique the writing, scene work, dialogue, action, pacing, the “promise of the novel” (this is very important, yet few writers ever think about it), characters, and more. Includes a line edit, actionable advice, and writing feedback. With my notes, you’ll have the confidence and know-how to make your work shine throughout.

Up to one single-spaced page query, four double-spaced pages synopsis, and ten double-spaced first pages of your manuscript.

I will read the first ten pages of your work and critique the writing, scene work, dialogue, action, pacing, the “promise of the novel” (this is very important, yet few writers ever think about it), characters, and more. Includes a line edit, actionable advice, and writing feedback. With my notes, you’ll have the confidence and know-how to make your work shine throughout.

Up to one single-spaced page query, four double-spaced pages synopsis, and ten double-spaced first pages of your manuscript.

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